Final Critique Boards

These are my boards for final critiques. These are not the five A2 boards.

After looking at my boards, I do not think the leaves pattern work as a set with the book. It looks like completely different project. I like the pencil case with mosquito pattern. I think I might not propose or use the leaves pattern for my final product and I will use the mosquito pattern apart of my final product. However, I do not think that clothes are suitable with the mosquito pattern because no one want to wear mosquito as their pattern on their clothes. In fact, I might propose to stationery instead like a pencil case, notebook covers, pencils, an eraser etc.

Feedback from final crits:-

• lovely work. so much development. been well through out and everything looks greet in context
• so much work. the animals great. so much character
• lovely textures and patterns
• repeated pattern is so lovely
• love the leaves i want it on all my stuff
• the book you made is great. love the concept
• love it
• great way of working
• incredible - you put my work to shame.
• nice work - maybe more dialogue on your presentation boards though.
• collage is working really well with your style. the playfulness of the media adds charm. 

 I had a conversation with my group after we finished our crits and we decided :

• to keep the audience to children.
• add barcode and a published company logo at the book
• move 'illustrated by' to the front and add a summary at the back. 
• products that I could considers are bed sheets, stickers, childnre's bag etc.